Strange Writing Published on June 17, 2021 Comments 22 Senryu 14 written by L. Stevens my roots feel tangled twisting inward, coiling when they should stretch down Share this:TwitterFacebookRedditTumblrPinterestEmailLike this:Like Loading...
kim881 says June 11, 2020 I know that feeling so well! I love the image you chose to illustrate you senryu. Trees are my favourrite plants. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
L. Stevens says June 11, 2020 Thank you! I find tree roots to be fascinating, they inspire a lot of my writing. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Ron. says June 11, 2020 The more gnarled the root, the less likely to be blown away. Senryulicious. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Frank Hubeny says June 11, 2020 Those roots grab on to whatever they can. My roots, however, feel twisted as well. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
msjadeli says June 11, 2020 a tenuous grip on groundedness. great metaphor. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
L. Stevens says June 12, 2020 Thank you, I find old trees interesting as well. They inspire a lot of my writing. LikeLike Reply
revivedwriter says June 11, 2020 Nicely done and the perfect photo to illustrate your words. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Helen Dehner says June 12, 2020 Roots deep into the soil of life keep us grounded. Your poem and image are awesome. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says June 14, 2020 Sometimes we have lost our own direction… and often that is reaching further down. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
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I know that feeling so well! I love the image you chose to illustrate you senryu. Trees are my favourrite plants.
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Thank you! I find tree roots to be fascinating, they inspire a lot of my writing.
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The more gnarled the root, the less likely to be blown away.
Senryulicious.
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Thank you, much appreciated!
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Those roots grab on to whatever they can. My roots, however, feel twisted as well.
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A thoughtful senyru!
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Thank you!
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a tenuous grip on groundedness. great metaphor.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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Powerful words and photo – I admire old trees.
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Thank you, I find old trees interesting as well. They inspire a lot of my writing.
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Nicely done and the perfect photo to illustrate your words.
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Thank you!
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Roots deep into the soil of life keep us grounded. Your poem and image are awesome.
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Thank you!
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I understand that feeling so well! ❤️
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Thanks, I’m glad I’m not the only one!
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Fear. It does that. (K)
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Agreed
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Sometimes we have lost our own direction… and often that is reaching further down.
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Absolutely, thank you for reading.
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