Strange Writing

Published on August 10, 2020

Midnight in New Orleans

written by L. Stevens

the streetlights wavered
hazy and unsure
the air clung to her
like a damp sheet
it fluttered
but wouldn’t slide off

9 Comments

Lucy says
- August 10, 2020
Beautiful penned. I could FEEL the imagery in your words. Marvelous poem, it’s concise but so full of imagery and depth.

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- L. Stevens says
  - August 10, 2020
  Thank you, much appreciated!
  
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- Susi Bocks says
  - August 15, 2020
  Yes, and it makes one want to experience it!
  
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  - L. Stevens says
    
    August 15, 2020
    I appreciate that!
    
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  - Susi Bocks says
    
    August 15, 2020
    🙂 You’re welcome!
    
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Wanderer says
- August 11, 2020
This one is a beautifully piece ❤️

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- L. Stevens says
  - August 11, 2020
  Thank you!
  
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s.s. says
- August 11, 2020
Visual words. Beautiful.

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- L. Stevens says
  - August 11, 2020
  Thank you!
  
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