Strange Writing
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Senryu 57

a veil of whisky
fell over her eyes, again
obscuring the stars


  1. Such intriguing imagery in this piece—it’s incredible how you use figurative language to compare their eyes to the stars. That’s amazing writing! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. 💕


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