Strange Writing
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Senryu 57

a veil of whisky
fell over her eyes, again
obscuring the stars

3 Comments

  1. Such intriguing imagery in this piece—it’s incredible how you use figurative language to compare their eyes to the stars. That’s amazing writing! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. 💕

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