frightening image when coupled with words Horror Haiku. First two lines of haiku are indeed in line with the Horror Haiku. I like the almost ironic shift to the oft used phrase, filled to the brim, as your last line. I usually think of that line in a positive sense and you’ve really upended it here. Well done. So glad you posted to the prompt!
Well…enveloped in the dark dirty waters – is def not fun 😂😱
Love the writing 💪
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I loved reading this, very descriptive, I still feel the cold creeping over me! Well done 💙
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Thank you!
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Strong write L, lots in that haiku – the pic is haunting.
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could be someone’s last thoughts in this world. horror is the right genre as you wonder how she got there…
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Yes, thank you!
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You’re welcome, L.
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frightening image when coupled with words Horror Haiku. First two lines of haiku are indeed in line with the Horror Haiku. I like the almost ironic shift to the oft used phrase, filled to the brim, as your last line. I usually think of that line in a positive sense and you’ve really upended it here. Well done. So glad you posted to the prompt!
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Thank you for noticing, it’s exactly what I was going for!
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Chilling write.
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Thank you!
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I like the thought of being filled with midnight blue, but I realize it is a “horror” haiku.
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It depends on which way you look at it. Thank you for reading!
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