Strange Writing Published on February 13, 2020 Comments 17 Moving On written by L. Stevens sometimes I miss you but I’m relieved that I don’t know you anymore Share this:TwitterFacebookRedditTumblrPinterestEmailLike this:Like Loading...
Tanya Cliff says February 17, 2020 Excellent use of a punch (miss you) and counterpunch (relieved not to know you). It creates a lot of drama in a few short lines! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Innerdialects says February 17, 2020 Hey that was rich! I can actually relate to that….fabulous ! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Angela van Son says February 18, 2020 And, it helps me realise why people like some of my short ones. During NaPoWriMo I sometimes feel guilty for my short ones, as if I’m cheering. Yours makes me see that short can be all that’s needed sometimes. Thank you! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
L. Stevens says February 20, 2020 Thank you! I definitely think their is value to a succinct poem 🖤 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Everyday Strange 
Deep, but great 🖤
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Thank you!
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True
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And yet hard to admit sometimes!
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Nice to have burdens lifted.
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Absolutely!
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Powerful! And relatable!
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Thank you!
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Short indeed but spot on
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Excellent use of a punch (miss you) and counterpunch (relieved not to know you). It creates a lot of drama in a few short lines!
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Thank you!
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Hey that was rich! I can actually relate to that….fabulous !
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Thank you!
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I love it!
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Thank you!
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And, it helps me realise why people like some of my short ones. During NaPoWriMo I sometimes feel guilty for my short ones, as if I’m cheering. Yours makes me see that short can be all that’s needed sometimes. Thank you!
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Thank you! I definitely think their is value to a succinct poem 🖤
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