Tanka

written by L. Stevens

Cold lonely path

Long and winding, snow encrusted

Lit by faint moonlight

Unsure I’m alone, I pause

The snow crunches, a twig snaps

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iamahorrorfanatic says
- December 3, 2018
You’re not alone. I am there…
watching you…

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- L. Stevens says
  - December 3, 2018
  Ha! Thanks for reading 💀
  
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Robert says
- December 3, 2018
No you are not alone, start a fire. Sit down and chat with a weary stranger!

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- L. Stevens says
  - December 3, 2018
  An ending I hadn’t considered! Thank you for reading 🖤🔥
  
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j.a. case says
- December 4, 2018
Well done.

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jefftcann says
- December 4, 2018
That photo makes me want to lace up my running shoes and disappear into the woods. Is it one of yours?

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- L. Stevens says
  - December 4, 2018
  It isn’t, but it definitely reminded me of some of the New England snowstorms I’ve experienced in the past.
  
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  - jefftcann says
    
    December 4, 2018
    I love it.
    
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theorangutanlibrarian says
- December 4, 2018
Beautiful! Love the sense of tension!

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- L. Stevens says
  - December 4, 2018
  Thank you, much appreciated!
  
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The Mush from the Hill says
- January 31, 2020
Oowww, very creepy. Loved it!!!

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- L. Stevens says
  - February 3, 2020
  Thank you!
  
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  - The Mush from the Hill says
    
    February 4, 2020
    Your welcome 🙏
    
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