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Lai Poem

of goddess three

the wisest is me

the moon

rising up, you’ll see

the dead walking free

immune

weaving tree to tree

only I won’t flee

attuned

 

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The latest form challenge at Dverse is a Lai poem, which follows the below syllable and rhyme scheme. Coming up with two syllable lines was quite a challenge!

(a) (Five syllables)

(a) (Five syllables)
(b) (Two syllables)

(a) (Five syllables)
(a) (Five syllables)
(b) (two syllables

(a) (Five syllables)
(a) (Five syllables)
(b) (Two syllables)

3 Comments

  1. Liking that image of the dead walking free, weaving from tree to tree. Thanks for joining our poetry form challenge.

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